Jim Van Aalst

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  • portfolio website

    0 Votes
    The top

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:31 AM

    The website looks very creative, well done. There are a couple of things that bugs me.

    1 - The top of the page is too big, the tekst looks creative but i miss the flow. And maybe a little smaller.

    2 - Play with the menu. Try to use a more creative font or maybe a icon before the pagetitles.

    Good luck!!

  • Homepage Design for Small Business

    1 Vote
    Contrast

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:20 AM

    Try to create a little contrast in the design. Everything looks so flat.

    I think the whole idea is nicely done. I would make a little more depth in the design. And try to shorten the height of the full page. It looks like you have to scroll about 4 time to get to the bottom. No-one will do that....

    But overall looks okay! Good luck

  • Website making website

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    bold?

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:14 AM

    Nice design, especially the different backgrounds and your colour usage. And i like the small icons you used. (did you make them yourself?)

    BUT

    Every text i can find looks like a bold font. Try to keep the visitor focused on the most important item in this design.

    Thats it!

    Keep it up!

  • Wentros Logo

    0 Votes
    Try not to copy

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:08 AM

    I understand that copying is easier than working out a logo yourself. But this is almost a exact copy of the Wordpress logo.

    Try to be more creative with the design. For example:

    • Get the "W' out of the circle and make it part of the "http://www" phrase.

    • Try to get the wentros text on the same line

    Good luck!

  • Iconfinder | Search through more than 114,000 icons

    2 Votes
    Simple simple simple

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:05 AM

    This design looks great, in fact, it looks like i would suspect when looking for icons.

    The only thing that bugs me is the fact that you try to put everything so close together.

    1- create space between the thumbnails on you second image

    2- try to put as less as possible on the frontpage

    That's it. Good luck with your great design!

    • IconFinder
      IconFinder commented:
      Posted: on Mar 11, 2010 at 1:49 PM

      More white space. Less stuff on the frontpage.

      I Agree :-)

  • Airport Parking Website Design

    0 Votes
    Too creative

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:01 AM

    When i look at the design, i don't feel the "professional feel". The quickquote box looks good. but the free forms of the menubar are too curvy and out of cohersion.

    Try to make the part that's really important stand out from the rest. Try to make the colours a little more contrasting.

    Good luck!

  • Website redesign for Real estate agent

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    Create eaze

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 3:57 AM

    The design is very complex. I would defenitely start with sorting your design to less links and text. Try to focus on your customer. The "special offer" is an advertation right? Try to keep this as small as possible.

    I think the header is too high, try to focus your most important information on the topleft of your design (as this is the first what visitors will see)

    Good luck! :)