Ari Suardiyanti

The colors really assemble christmas :p anyway, I like this packaging! The package overall looked elegant, but the part where you the logo on the left side seems like it's screaming for attention, I dunno if this is a good thing or a bad one, but if these packages are placed in a row with other chocolates, my eyes would find it pretty easy because of that. Great work, liked! :)

It looks much better now,

1. a little bit of light grey gradient for the menu bar should make it perfect, otherwise you can like it like the way it is if you think it's best,
2. on your dropdown menu, Overall it's good, but try to change the "New/Best Seller" font into mini badge, take a look at your "save 50%" badge, make the "New/Best Seller" on the dropdown like that badge but in rounded-rectangle, I believe it will look better and uniform :)
3. the promo line "if you order there or more items....", the magenta part of it is too close with the item cart, and the fading effect there just look wrong, try to move them to the left and give some space between it and the cart items, you might also make that promo line in one color, that should make it stands out more.
4. The slider idea is good, I like it, but the color of it, hm..... try to change the slider color to grey, match it with the effect you put on the price box.

I think that's all you need for this, it's almost done ^.^ Good luck.

I honestly love the design at first glance. But when I read the description and some reviews, this seems to be unrelated. If I didn't read the description I would say this is a mobile/electronic website or a international language course website. As mentioned by the previous reviewers, logo need to be customized a bit. And you main images (although you have nice images there :P), you should find attractive images that related to your content. Other than that, I faved this design :)

The layout seems pretty boring. This looks more like a system operating, not a website. I would suggest you to start over. Browse more website in this industry to get some inspiration on what you could change and make it better. I would also suggest you to play around with the text and color. Add some interesting main image to attract visitors attention. This could be better. Good luck :)

It's a big improvement from the previous one. But here some small things you could try to change to make it even better:

1. Menu bar: The first reviewer, Joe, was right about the Gradient on the menu bar. It's too strong, I would suggest you to change it with one color gradient with glossy look., and play around a bit with the text for the menu bar. Try all caps, then try to give some separation lines. See which one make the best look.
2. Content alignment: The tittle of your print services and the subtext, and price are clutter. I would suggest you to place the price on top, followed by the tittle of your service, i.e: Business Card, under it. Then you can put the subtext and more info. I'm pretty sure it will help to make the content alignment looks more organized.
3. Style consistency: I really like how you make the prints sticking out at the first line of your content. But it seems like you don't apply it in other services. Try to make them all in the same style, including the Logo service. I noticed that you have a shout box on the right. But I think if you place the service name and price like the above it will work better too.

From what i see, this is almost done. Just need bit of polishing. :) Good luck.

This is obviously appealing website. Really like the lines and the images you picked and arranged here. I have one suggestion: On the text "100 years of Indian Music...." try using sans serif font like Helvetica same font size (adjust if necessary) , I think that would look even better.

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Just saw the live page. Everything looks good, and I really like like the Category View. Well done! :)

When I look at this design, I can't really figured where to set my eyes first. You have too many things going on.

1. There's too many different colors around the website.
2. The design images and the service banner (special prices and else) look messy and unprofessional.
3. You don't have to stuff the website with many different icons here and there. Choose where to put them in certain place(s), like the ones on the home page (this week's great offer,...) is a good start.
4. Pick a professional images of people in printing. The image you use at the last page looks really unprofessional.

Try looking at some clean website like these: http://www.kre8iveminds.com/images/websites/website-1 http://www.websitetemplates.bz/images/0634m.jpg

But if you insist on the full color concept, see this example: http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/300W/f/2010/090/1/6/FlexbyColl3ctive.jpg

Good luck :)

You need to redesign this website from scratch. The look is outdated, and it will obviously make your visitor or customer close the web and look for the other jewelry website right away. You need to grab their attention by making an elegant website, it's a shame looking these pretty and gorgeous jewelry in this website. They deserve better layout. Here I found some great examples for you. You might want to look at them :)

http://www.stevenzheng.com/bg/uploadfile/200911/AM-homepage.jpg http://www.wanrosnah.com/sample%20of%20jewelry%20website%20template%20design1.gif http://images.webucast.com/webraylierjewelry.jpg

After seeing the previous designs of this project, nothing else I can critique. But I noticed a very small spot that you can fix.

Take a look at the icon on "Auto-Pilot" and "Built for Flexibility". They seems a bit bigger than those icons above them. See, the icons above them has perfect space between the text and the icon. Yup, that's all and it's done!

Great work! :)

It's a nice design, but it probably because of the main image is associated more to facial treatment than surgery. Changing the main image and other supporting image would help. :) Remember, images you choose help the viewer to directly figure what the website is all about in a glance.

Overall I love this, simple, elegant and really fits for hotel managers as your target :) But as Eric Venuto mentioned, that blue color in "AIR" draw attention to it more that the rest of the design, but I don't think it matters much since it's a folded brochure :) good work.

Simple :) I kinda like it, anyway, try minimize the space around +, now it looks separating, I know that you try to make it read "Prod'Info" not "Prodinfo", but bring them just a bit closer, and....the blue line on the letter "d", hm.... try to make the blue straight, and may be you could also add blue or rectangular in the middle of blue lines on letter "i" for "info"

Good luck ^.^

love this! :) the only thing I suggest you would be the space, take a look at the the space from "The Tea Story" to "Our Loose-Leaf Teas" feels like you left too much space, try bottom align it with the content on the left, considering that will end there. If you do this you should also move the main picture a bit down. And the space between "Our Loose-Leaf Teas" with the bottom paper is too much, try to put it down, half of the space should be good. :)

first time I see this, hm? Bali? this reminds me a bit of Bali island. Agreed with Rachel Bratt on making this more paradise look. The background you use, should be the main image or supporting image, it doesn't fit to be a there as the background, it makes it look more like a flyer. both logo (header text) and the menubar needs more work, try to find some inspiration on similar type of website too.

Good luck :)

I agree with Alan, plus this is mostly about the kids, and the site should be more colorful than this. This site is actually better than the current one, but you should really change the color scheme. :)

It's overall looks nice, but the typo are just too big, especially on the logo, and the paragraph under it. These big typo makes the web look stuffed, by making the font a little bit smaller will help the layout to have some more space :)

it's overall ok, but the impression, at first I really thought it was a website for lawyers or anything related to law and legal, try to make the right impression with right illustration for the visitor of the web or even your target. :)

I like the 1st one! :) but the menu bar seems to be too wide, I would move the logo up and the menu bar under it, and for the menu bar, try to align it to the left and place the balloon on top of the empty menu bar on the right ;) good luck

I like it, the ticket for the logo, the pop corn really grab my attention, the layout is nice, :) great job

I would just leave the m without any modification, it looks just a bit awkward, other than that I like it :) oh, also if you could change the tagline color, that would be great :)

try seeing the tree from the bird perspective. You are now seeing the tree from human perspective, it's too obvious. Use just one tree, I'd suggest that on the 1st one, take off the brown shape, make a round circle with that brown color in the middle of the tree (the green puffy leaves on the 1st logo). Make the color a bit bright, and limit the color to 3. The font for the text works for me ;)

I like the 2nd one, but I take a look at your N logo. the gray rectangular didn't touch the bottom of the green gradient rectangular, is it in purpose?

try to decrease the amount of the buttons :) other than that, I think it's good

I overall like the design, it's clean and simple but I can't figure out the theme of it that you are trying to apply. For a second it looks professional with a clean simple look, then there's the wrapped paper feel with outer space background, also I noticed you have sticker feel icons on your twitter account (and also on most of the red and black buttons), plus there's insect images. All that is confusing between clean, outer space, or nature? all I can suggest, try to stick with one theme, ;)

hope this is help