Fenson Jeremy
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I am a passionate freelance designer who does not call what he does 'work'.
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Users Last 25 Reviews
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Concept: Website for bus company
On Your Way There.I like the subtle details you put on the site and the header is great - clean and simple.
Navigation is clear and easily distinguished between priorities.
It could look more attractive unless you're heading for a more conservative look.
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Concept: SocialQuestions
More polished designI understand that you want a minimalistic look but I think that you can take the visual appeal a bit higher with very little work.
As for usability, I think it's efficient. Visitors know where to go, what to do and it's pretty straightforward.
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Thanks Fenson, you're absolutely right. I know the design is not great. We were more focused on usability and developing the site. We're considering getting a designer to have a look on it and give it a face lift.
Waleed Eissa
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Concept: Web Design for Caaf
Red BoxI would decrease the size of the red box border. It is very overwhelming and audiences could not focus on the content.
There is a problem in typography here.
I like your contact box however.
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Concept: Pizza Site Design
Unnecessary effects.The color scheme is fine, not great but will do.
I agree with Peter Georgiev, the outer glow of the text below is distracting. You want to sell the products, not the text.
As for the others, I suggest lessening the amount of bevels, embosses and glows on the design. Only use subtle amounts of them.
Heading is too noisy, get rid of those thumbnails. It doesn't seam in with the design.
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Concept: Personal logo
ColorsThe text is fine so I'd do more work on the mark.
Somthing just doesn't feel right and I think it's the colors. They just don't 'pop'. I also think that stroke of the box is little too think. Maybe lessen it about 1 or 2 pixels? Try experimenting with the golden proportion on that one.
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Concept: Theme Force v2
Improved but still needs fixingThe navigation is more clear than the last one but I still feel that the design is too common.
There's tonnes of Wordpress themes websites out there and competition gets stiff everyday. I feel that this will not attract enough.
First impressions are always important.
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Thansk Fenson, the products actually have their own domains and landing pages (very sales driven) and this will be more of a consolidation, so I hope this will balance things out :) Cheers
Noel 1575
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Concept: Business Card
overall designThe design is ok but I just don't see it sync with the company website. Besides, it doesn't really promote a design firm. More like an accounting firm.
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Concept: Website for Freight Transportation Company
footerI would try to give the footer a different color and create more contrast on the design. But make sure not to make it stand out more than the main content.
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Concept: Email-Gallery
remove the emails in the headerI agree with Nate Hamilton. I'm fond of minimalistic design in gallery sites.
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Concept: Fat Astronaut Productions logo
change the typefaceI think the mark is great but probably you could change the typeface to a less childish one like an adult handwriting rather than a child's.
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Concept: BlogBabel Layout
background colorsI suggest adding different background colors to create focus and separate content.
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Concept: Logo Design for Athena
I would change the typographyI appreciate the simplicity. But I'm not too sure about the typography. It doesn't really say 'fun education'
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Thank you so much
Raja 2692
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Concept: First Launch
use more contrasting coloursi think the use of more interesting colors could make this site more interesting.
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Concept: logo for a cafe called "Blink"
if you can't lose the saucer, make it smallerI love the concept but the saucer does get in the way. Probably you could adjust the width of it to just a little bigger than the cup base.
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do u want me to reduce the width of the saucer a little ya i feel that's a good idea..
Swarat Ghosh 4815 -
need ur valuable vote on this :)
Swarat Ghosh 4815 -
I like it, is very singular but the the same time is nice!
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Concept: Client Business Cards
the background. i'll leave it white.everything looks fine but I'm not so sure abut the background. The radial gradient doesn't seem to transition well. Maybe use a lighter grey.
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