Donald Gillis

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• Bolvar Solutions Home page

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  Get to the point!

  Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 12:18 PM

  Just not sure what your target message is

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    Roman Hromenkov commented:

    Posted: on Jan 13, 2010 at 1:25 AM

    Yes, i add it in my new version

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• Wordpress Theme for Pubs (Pt. 3)

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  Lighten the balck to a black/green

  Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 12:15 PM

  Nicely done. Clean, could use a little more of the Celtic graphics to get across the Irish pub theme

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    Noel commented:

    Posted: on Jan 12, 2010 at 6:17 PM

    Thanks Donald, I'd like to keep the theme open to English pubs too though, so I can't go too celtic :)

    Cheers

    Noel

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• Sales Page for an eBook

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  Get what book?

  Posted on Nov 01, 2009 at 10:26 PM

  I am immediately hit with confusion. Perhaps the book title could be more dominant and the call to action more closely associated with the specific goal.

  I like the color scheme and it is a clean page, just not deliberate.

• Home Page re-design for Tube2Tone.com

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  Label the eight sliders

  Posted on Nov 01, 2009 at 10:18 PM

  Layout is clean and functional. The background white could be enhanced. I think it would be fairly easy to navigate as long as the conversion utilities are within the clicked link.

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    mascha van tongeren commented:

    Posted: on Nov 03, 2009 at 11:12 AM

    thank you !

    We have made the changes !

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