Chris Coyier

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  • Cosmetics Packaging Company Website

    3 Votes
    Too much type for homepage

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    People will never read that much descriptive text. I'd shorten it up, or somehow make it more interesting typographically. Perhaps make the main image a little larger too and shorten up that line length.

    The logo looks a little generic web2.0 to me, with the reversed out "Pack", like LinkedIn. I'm not sure that's doing anything for the logo.

    The product images on the bottom are nice, I could see them moving up right front an center.

    • Szymon Niemczura
      Szymon Niemczura commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 6:05 PM

      Yes, you're right! I'll try to do something with this txt.

      Thanks for useful tips! :)

  • Logo Design for a Web Portfolio

    0 Votes
    Type

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 4:38 PM

    I'd wouldn't try to force the type into the umbrella design at all. the umbrella can stand on it's own, and the text could sit next to it.

  • Car enthusiasts website logo

    0 Votes
    make the keyhole go straight across

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 4:35 PM

    The dropshadow definitely has to go. Its distracting and doesn't add anything.

  • Darkstage Studio website

    1 Vote
    • The three dots graphic before titles is pretty neat, but it feels too tight on some of the titles. I think it looks best before the 1 2 3 4 5 and far too tight on News and Contact

    • The line between the logo and slogan is too tall and breaks the grid in an unsettling way

    • the highlight of "home" doesn't quite touch that line and feels a little weird to me

    • the icons in the footer are a bit distracting, maybe go grayscale?

    • Yair Mor
      Yair Mor commented:
      Posted: on Nov 01, 2009 at 4:31 AM

      hmmm you made some good points. I will update this accordingly. Thanks!