Chris Coyier
User's Concepts
Users Last 25 Reviews
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Cosmetics Packaging Company Website
3 VotesPeople will never read that much descriptive text. I'd shorten it up, or somehow make it more interesting typographically. Perhaps make the main image a little larger too and shorten up that line length.
The logo looks a little generic web2.0 to me, with the reversed out "Pack", like LinkedIn. I'm not sure that's doing anything for the logo.
The product images on the bottom are nice, I could see them moving up right front an center.
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Logo Design for a Web Portfolio
0 VotesI'd wouldn't try to force the type into the umbrella design at all. the umbrella can stand on it's own, and the text could sit next to it.
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Car enthusiasts website logo
0 VotesThe dropshadow definitely has to go. Its distracting and doesn't add anything.
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Darkstage Studio website
1 VoteThe three dots graphic before titles is pretty neat, but it feels too tight on some of the titles. I think it looks best before the 1 2 3 4 5 and far too tight on News and Contact
The line between the logo and slogan is too tall and breaks the grid in an unsettling way
the highlight of "home" doesn't quite touch that line and feels a little weird to me
the icons in the footer are a bit distracting, maybe go grayscale?
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Yair Mor commented:hmmm you made some good points. I will update this accordingly. Thanks!



Yes, you're right! I'll try to do something with this txt.
Thanks for useful tips! :)