Romy Haik
Company: Dax Designs
Users Concepts
Users Last 25 Reviews
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Concept: Web 2.0 EchoShelf Logo
Looks good, but change "Shelf" fontI didn't really find the Brush Script font matching here. Good colours, but the font kind of ruined it. Try using something a little more sharp, yet still hand-writing? Good work, add some gradient to the first up arrow abouve the E, because it is the only thing in the logo that doesnt have any gradient. Good job.
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Thanks, I've changed the font.
Alex Fuller
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Concept: Airport Parking website
Too noisyI think the website is too noisy, try making everything smoother, make some images out of focus (Add some blur maybe). I would make the plane picture smaller, as mentioned before by Miro. Nice design, not very creative. I would make something special, show us why we should choose them, and noone else, how are they different?
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Concept: iSTORE Logo Design
Change the green legI would make the green leg smaller, and not bended so much. Make it do a "^" shape with the other foot, so it looks better (I think). Great work, good concept.
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Concept: SPM Transport New Logo Design
Angle of bird + sub titleWell, the angle of the bird make's it look un-realistic, and very "weird. I would make the bird perhaps a little thicker? The subtitle "transport" look's like it's not so important, the color is different and the font.. I wouldnt make it ITALIC, but REGULAR, and maybe decrease the size of the font? I would make it maybe the same font as the "SPM" title, and make it go higher, so it would fit just right and wont make any new borders for the logo, so everything stays just in place. I hope you understood what I mean, I am just trying to help - not to insult.
After all - good work, could use some tiny touches.
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Concept: Construction Logo
A bit childish, and over-detailed.The logo is over-detailed. The colors make it a bit childish, I would use more serious colors. It's a good start, but there is much more to improve.
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Concept: Christmas Campaign Theme
Very messy.It looks overall very messy, Too much playing with the green color, very dominant here. I would use a bit more grey. The structure is ok, I would spice up the right side of the website too.
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I suppose you're referring to the rest of the page...well all that is the CMS that I just have to work with. Pre-developed before my hire and can't change now. But that part is too come...just not for a few months!
Joel Glovier 1144
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Concept: Design for iPhone Application "Mused"
Nothing at all.Great design, love the wood texture. Very well designed for an iPhone app. No comments on this one.
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Concept: VIDEO REPORT BLOG
Maybe the logoThe logo is really designless, compared to the website. I would make a real logo for this one. Basically that's it. Looks professional.
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Concept: FTT Consulting Website
Header & navigation barWell, it looks good overall, but the header looks very streched, and it's quallity isn't good at all.
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part of that reason I mentioned above is that I've been having to use sample images, I plan on buying the full high resolution ones when I start finishing the design.
Sabrina Heath 241
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Concept: website design for corporate
The navigation bar.Everything looks very good, same goes for positioning. Though I would make one thing better, the navigation bar. It is a little bit boring, make the grey a little darker. Add a little lighting on the buttons.
Good job, looks very very good.
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Concept: Prototype for golf website
The order of things & iconsI think the right lane, where the "Why Sand Valley?" is not organized. I think the "Spotlight" should be first, then the video, then the other two banners / ads. I would make the navigation fonts a little bigger. Same goes for the icons on the bottom. Make the text larger, and the icons too.
Good job.
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I also think same but client is the king and his choice is above all else when he pays $ :D...thanks for your suggestions
Ben Eradhun 247
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Concept: website mock for cracked media
The main paper, and navigationI really liked this one, though something does bug me. If you see, the website itself looks a bit messy, which is nice and all, but the page itself, where everything is written on, is a non-deffected paper. It's very straight, and the texture you gave it doesnt match it. I would add a few rips to the paper, to make it all match together. Maybe make the navigation text, a little larger. 2 pixels would be fine. Hope I helped, this is a really good work, I just think these final touches would make it perfect.
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Concept: website design for cafe website
Final touchesIt looks great, really. But you still have some final touches to make. I would make the black text box, a little taller, because the "All Coffee" and "nothing but Coma!" Touch the end of it, just give them a little more room to breath. The top navigation bar is too simple, add something to it. Great work.
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Concept: Website Prototypes
Nothing :)2nd version is best. Absolutely perfect, looks very serious and professional. Great job on that!
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Concept: CARNAVAL GRAMADO
Overall look, pretty messy.The are some un-needed brushes (the black and white letters) on the top. They are un-needed, atleast that's what I think. Great combination of colours. The "Carnaval Gramado" is a bit unreadable due to the brushes going out of them. Great work after all.
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Concept: New software company SITE
Too empty..The site does look unusual, but it's very empty. The little box, which "floats" is the only object on the website. The background is pretty strong, especially with it's color. I would make the website itself (the black box) bigger, and add more text. The top navigation bar could use some improvements. Site is very empty, one again.
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Concept: Pintando a história
a little bit too messy..It looks good overall, but a little bit too old. The white part of the sponsores (Or I dont know what it is) seems like you had no place to put it at, so you just stuck it there. Great job overall.
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Concept: logo design for "Be Positive" t-shirt line
Add more colour, make it a little bit more fun.Great idea, really. I really liked the first one, with the UNbolded font. I would maybe make it a different colour like light blue to make it a little bit more fun, because black doesn't transmit any positivity :) Hope I helped, great job on the idea.
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Thanks for the comments Romy! This is just the initial stage really, I was fleshing out some concepts that came to me in meditation =P color will be added after I get the mark worked out with the type ;-)
any thoughts on the coloring? i was thinking blue hues, but im not sure - again, keeping the colors to a minimum.
danke!
shane ernest 604 -
As I thought, light blue colours. I dont think a gradient will be a good choice, and even fi you do choose a gradient, dont use anything radical. I sugesst using a light blue and make the + a nice red, to make it more noticeable from the rest of the logo, which is important, because you want to pass the idea that it is POSITIVE. Still dont know if using a red is a good idea, but you can do something to play with the noticeability of the +.
Romy Haik 292 -
ya im worried about red - it's pretty popular in the Non Profit Market, i.e. (Red) for Aids, Red for Red Cross, etc. etc.
Ill play with some colors after the mark is finished!
shane ernest 604
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