Josh Nielsen

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Website: joshontheweb.com

About Me: I am a web producer currently working on building up my brand and clientele

User's Concepts

Users Last 25 Reviews

  • Vision/Mission Poster

    1 Vote

    I like the colors and I think the design as a whole is quite nice.

    I think you may be able to drop the DODEA MISSION and VIRTUAL HIGH SCHOOL VISION since it is a bit redundant given the large heading at top and bottom. then fill that area with a wider paragraph that runs along the top and bottom of the inner content. It may not work, but I find myself struggling to read the paragraphs since they have line breaks after every 2 or three words.

    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Jan 13, 2010 at 8:01 PM

      I think that's a great idea. I will test that out in the morning, I bet it will balance it out -- the small column was bugging me but I couldn't think where to put the text besides there!

      Thanks!

    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Jan 14, 2010 at 5:05 PM

      Thanks again for the idea -- worked great I think!

    • Josh Nielsen
      Josh Nielsen commented:
      Posted: on Jan 14, 2010 at 6:59 PM

      glad to help, I think it looks great.

  • Buisness Card Design

    1 Vote
    cleaner image extraction

    Posted on Aug 25, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    not really sure how to remedy this, but to me the ?trilobyte? has a very obvious "extracted with photoshop" look.

    • Josh Nielsen
      Josh Nielsen commented:
      Posted: on Aug 25, 2009 at 8:56 PM

      didn't realize this was a business card, maybe it is less obvious at a smaller scale. what is "art + extinction" supposed mean?

    • Travis Sinclair
      Travis Sinclair commented:
      Posted: on Aug 25, 2009 at 9:50 PM

      the art + extinction....i love the way it sounds, and the extinction of man / post-apocalyptic theme tends to come up in my work. on a t-shirt i made, i screen printed some graphics of ants and it said "god intervened, man became extinct" a lot of what i do tends to focus on mankind's existence as being 'temporary' (makes people squirm)

  • Website redesign for my own personal website kaplang.com

    0 Votes
    the styles are disconnected

    Posted on Aug 25, 2009 at 8:05 PM

    It seems to me that aside from needing to break up your site, your styles are disconnected. You have a smooth creamy header at the top but then a web 2.0 glossy navbar. Your services sections seems a little "clip-art" to me. Then you have a Welcome banner that is an entirely new color and style. I think you should consolidate to a simple few colors and a cohesive style. I am partial to the creamy style that you have in the top with your logo. Your contact info should be in the footer or on another page, not in the header. People are interested in what you do first, then they will worry about contacting you.

  • MobileMySite

    0 Votes
    not much i would change

    Posted on Aug 25, 2009 at 7:54 PM

    the radial gradient in the lower gray section was a little distracting to me as I was reading the white text and the contrast with the bg would change as I read left to right. Not sure if you should necessarily change that just because of me, but maybe see if any others feel the same way. Possibly make the gradient a little more subtle. Otherwise I think it is a very effective and profesional site.

  • unikdesign portfolio/website

    2 Votes
    give portfolio section more space

    Posted on Aug 24, 2009 at 7:03 AM

    Very nice design! I love how spacious and welcoming the header is. but then the portfolio section seems crowded in contrast. I would go for only 3 item that have plenty of breathing room. also the footer with the diagonal lines seems a little "8-bit" compared to the modern smooth feeling the rest of the site has. The .js transitions are awesome with the fixed logo, love it.

    • Sam Mularczyk
      Sam Mularczyk commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 7:27 AM

      Yeah, I wasn't sure about the footer either =) I was thinking the exact same thing about the portfolio - I'll get onto that tomorrow. Thanks!

  • Broken Crayon Portfolio

    0 Votes
    feels schizophrenic to me

    Posted on Aug 24, 2009 at 2:45 AM

    I have to say that I don't like how the dark and light sections of the site mesh. Is it a light, open, "breath of fresh air" site? Or is it a dark, stylish, cozy site? feels to me like you need to decide on one. It looks like there is attention to detail and is done well, I just feel the two styles are in conflict.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 8:04 AM

      This is one problem that I have been trying to fix. Do you know any color that would look good for the header background. I tried some different variations but none have looked good. I would like to keep the theme like a "breath of fresh air", as you said instead of "dark and stylish." Either way if you can come up with some good color combinations, I'd be happy to try them.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM

      Actually though...the two colors (brown and blue) are actually close to being complementary. (look it up in kuler. use the blue color as the base.)

    • Josh Nielsen
      Josh Nielsen commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 8:19 PM

      I don't think that the colors themselves are bad together, just that the site seems pulled in two directions. Don't get me wrong, I like the site a lot. I just think it might feel more cohesive if you went for one main idea (light or dark) and used the other more sparsely.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 9:22 PM

      I think that too...just haven't come up with a working solution.

  • Aviaturgus

    0 Votes
    too "photoshopped" looking

    Posted on Aug 24, 2009 at 2:36 AM

    I agree with Szymon about the sparkles and glam and also about the links. the overall layout isn't bad. I would consider a short description of your site just to help newcomers. also the quicklinks at the right of the header are almost invisible. might want to give them some contrast from the surrounding area.

  • Baltic Apartments

    0 Votes
    really like it

    Posted on Aug 24, 2009 at 2:23 AM

    I am jealous, i wish i had designed it!

  • Web site redesign for air-conditioning shop

    1 Vote
    increase logo size, decrease vendor logo size

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:48 PM

    the header to me seems broken and disconnected. if the VEKA-ING in the top left is the company logo i woulnd't know it. it needs to be bigger to seperate it from the other two item in the header. since they are all roughly the same size the seem like they are all on the same level of importance and related, which they are not. with that said, it is a very nice stylish design. i ilke the depth that the menu bars have a lot.

    • Davor Tomic
      Davor Tomic commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 1:10 AM

      Josh, I totally agree. The header defenitely needs some more work in a way you have described it. I will make the logo bigger. Thank you very much for the suggestion.

  • Church Logo

    0 Votes
    fonts are great, need a icon.

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:41 PM

    i don;t like the cross used int he last example. If you are going to use a cross maybe use the same alignment as the first example and use a slimmer cross to rest above "Pr" and wrap over the top of the "R". if you did that you may need to bring the R and h at the end into alignment.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Sep 06, 2009 at 2:20 PM

      i added a better cross that could be used as a icon.

  • Trio Design Logo

    0 Votes
    i like it

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:20 PM

    I think the way the second one aligns nicely on the left and right is nice and the chopped t it makes it seem more stylish and unique. I don't think the glow would be a problem if the logo was displayed smaller. I am assuming it won't be this big in use. If you are going to use it at this size then I would consider dropping the blur atleast on the "trio" and maybe keep it on the "design".

  • compasswheel

    1 Vote
    +1 for changing the font for wheel

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:08 PM

    It is very nice, the COMPASS font is spot on, but wheel could use something diferent, also you might consider going a little simpler with the compass image, it seems a bit busy inside the inner circle. although I like it anyway, I would just be interested to see it in a simpler format.

    • Jason Li
      Jason Li commented:
      Posted: on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:37 PM

      Thanks. I've been trying to find the right font for WHEEL too...but having trouble. What would you suggest I use, a sans serif or serif font?