A Review of dGenerateFilms.com by Robert Tipping

Balance out the header

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    Balance out the header

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 7:35 PM

    First let me say what a great url I guess some one has to snag the winners.

    This site is inconsistent with proportion and I think the catalyst of the work here reflects professionalism - was the site done in a hurry?.

    Sticking with the header a squint would spell out the enlarged logo and the misplaced map image I say squint as i think your caught up with the detail instead of balancing blobs on a line.

    I have to say also that given the opportunity to create valid code (as in your layout could be easily validated.)there is not much effort on your part to do so .

    I think a rest and a second go around on tiding up will yield a very nice site,

    • Keli Marks
      Keli Marks commented:
      Posted: on Nov 22, 2009 at 10:29 PM

      i really appreciate your comments. I have played with the header a bit and maybe am a little too biased at this point. How would you position the map image? in relation to achieve better balance. The code issue is super valid. meaning i need to consider the coding implications. i think the updated version is a little more feasible. Thanks again!

    • Robert Tipping
      Robert Tipping commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 8:11 AM

      IMO. http://www.mode1resilients.com/chinafilmmockup-copy-2.png

    • Keli Marks
      Keli Marks commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 8:56 AM

      Ohh! sorry misunderstood, the outline was an accident and i kinda liked it....however....i am in total agreement with taking it out, it serves no purpose.

      thank you!

    • Robert Tipping
      Robert Tipping commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 9:06 AM

      Image is also scaled down moved out of the "crunchy"top right corner.(Map).