• Sean Larkin

    Sean Larkin

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    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 7:39 AM

    looks good. I like number 1. i think from here, you could play around with small tweaks here and there until you feel it's perfect.

    It may be a matter of preference, but I'd like to see the hat centered over the type. It's almost there now, but just a little off. It'll take a little finesse to make "food" and "lover" the same width, but i think it can be done.

    things I would try out, just to see how it looked, not necessarily saying they'll be better, would be:

    A. removing the bottom line of the hat. B. scaling the hat up so that it engulfs the type (can be done in conjunction with A) C. different knife/fork stylings