• Li Ainley-Walker

    Li Ainley-Walker

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    The saucer

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 3:53 AM

    I do like the design, but like others have already said, I'm not sure about the saucer. It makes it too heavy, and with the detail of the steam at the top as well, the name gets kind of lost.

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 3:58 AM

      thanks Li i do know that Saucer is making this graphics bit heavier but don't u think with out that it will look incomplete because i have tried in my earlier version.. but i myself didnt like that i hope u can understand my point..

    • Li Ainley-Walker
      Li Ainley-Walker commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 4:04 AM

      Of course I understand where you're coming from! Is there a way you could bring the focus back to the typography? I like how it looks like it's written in chalk, similar to a cafe's menu or specials board, but it still seems a bit lost to me, if you get what I mean. Like I said before though, I do like the overall design :)

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 4:06 AM

      will see what can be done better anyway thanks for posting :)