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Overall very nice. I might consider using a very clean, simple, light font like avenir light or something like that which would echo the clean lines of the astronaut vector art. I think you get a kidsy feel just from the artwork.
Is there a particular reason for it to be an imaginary company? Just building up your portfolio? If so, I would suggest doing work for real companies even if it is pro bono. It is much tougher and much more educational to do work with and for real clients.
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Kevin Williamson commented:The one on purpose was just because it did not really have a purpose. As a fictional job there is no demographic, no client to approve, no set of objectives. It wasn't a negative, just a reflection of it being a hypothetical job.
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I am doing for real companies, just doing some imaginary stuff so I dont get rusty, I am training myself. Thank you for your comment!
Although, why did you rank the purpose as 1? I think the idea was passed out very well.
About the suggestion on the font, I will be trying it, thank you.