A Review of Irish Pub (Part 3) by Amy Feger

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  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 1:21 PM

    Hi Noel,

    I really like this one. I like that you have the bartender up front and personal

    I only suggest two things to polish this up.

    I love the view of the top photo, it just gets me a bit to see the blurred people.

    The other tid bit is the type block next to the bar tender pic. There are a lot of gaps between words. and one little word is left by itself at the end of the paragraph. I don't know the exact solution to solve that one. Maybe make the paper bigger, the pic placement different?

    Nice pleasant colors.