• Sean Larkin

    Sean Larkin

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    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    It's good, but a little rough still. Is the saucer necessary?

    I didn't even notice the heart of steam until I read Gemma's post. What could you do to make it more noticeable, but not out-right obvious?

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 15, 2009 at 12:50 PM

      thanks !!

    • Erica Kolton
      Erica Kolton commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 12:03 PM

      I noticed the heart of steam pretty quickly. But to push it a little more you could make the colors of the steam closer in values. (a red and a warm orange for example). I like that the bottom logo has the saucer it looks more finished. If you added the saucer to the top version I think either logo will work.