A Review of Personal Business Card - Freelance Graphic Design by Ovi Hentea

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  • Ovi Hentea

    Ovi Hentea

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    Posted on Jul 30, 2009 at 1:47 PM

    Consider ditching the slight-angle. Work on the typography on the left, making it more unified (ditch the line and the white, find other ways - size/style - to emphasize the name)

    And a slight tweak, drop the alltogether C or put in Cell. Plus, do you really expect mail/personal visits? If it comes down to that point in your work, your client will most likely have other avenues of getting a hold of your info. Just my $.02

    • Sean Haney
      Sean Haney commented:
      Posted: on Jul 31, 2009 at 2:11 AM

      Thanks for the pointers....I am still working on this one....all the tips help....thanks again!

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