A Review of SPM Transport New Logo Design by Romy Haik

Angle of bird + sub title

  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

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    Angle of bird + sub title

    Posted on Nov 08, 2009 at 7:09 AM

    Well, the angle of the bird make's it look un-realistic, and very "weird. I would make the bird perhaps a little thicker? The subtitle "transport" look's like it's not so important, the color is different and the font.. I wouldnt make it ITALIC, but REGULAR, and maybe decrease the size of the font? I would make it maybe the same font as the "SPM" title, and make it go higher, so it would fit just right and wont make any new borders for the logo, so everything stays just in place. I hope you understood what I mean, I am just trying to help - not to insult.

    After all - good work, could use some tiny touches.