• Alyo

    Alyo

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    Bold headings

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    From a viewer's perspective, the only thing i would change is the headings (specialy "we're focused on your success"). Try changing that if it would do any better.

    • Alyo
      Alyo commented:
      Posted: on Nov 07, 2009 at 1:30 PM

      Let me correct my self: the only thing I would add to the previus reviews, not the only thing I would change!