A Review of Hospitality Management Services by Sean Larkin

Pretty solid right off the bat.

But...

The color blue doesn't give a warm feeling. Blue is cold, cool, medicinal. Try some autumn hues.

I like a use of a think, handwritten font, but the one you chose has too much waviness for my taste. Actually, I only really see it in the i's and l (maybe the t also), so maybe just straighten them out.

The Y needs some help. The tail coming off the top of the letter obscures what it is. However, I still read it correctly, so maybe it works.