• Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Good start

    Posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 7:36 AM

    Have you thought about punching out the db out of the black square? The font for "Design on a budget doesn't seem to work with the db font. I like your colors for the most part. I would use a dark charcoal color instead of the black color. Good start here but keep working on this concept.

    • Tellesman
      Tellesman commented:
      Posted: on Nov 05, 2009 at 2:28 PM

      Ok, made some alterations. I like the punchout out look you suggested. Also changed the font for the tagline. How's it look?

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Nov 06, 2009 at 8:18 AM

      LOVE the punchout look, great job! I would take the stroke off the object and just keep it super simple. I'm not sold on the font or layout of the text. I would play around with some different concepts on the type set.