A Review of Portfolio design by Oliver Martin

I'm not sure

  • Oliver Martin

    Oliver Martin

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    I'm not sure

    Posted on Jul 29, 2009 at 6:15 PM

    I think you have a different concept with the whole horizontal navigation thing. However, even though I like rough style illustration (when you don't mind as an artist whether elements look slick and neat) this is too like a "school playground" drawing.

    I don't know if that's what it is supposed to be like but if you like it thats all that matters I guess :)

    You could do with more space filling content as there isn't much happening. In fact some content could be put together on one page rather than spread over many.

    • Wouter De Loose
      Wouter De Loose commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 6:29 PM

      Actually, this is the style that i had in mind when i started the design in photoshop.

      I do agree about the space filling part, there is too much free space, i tried some things, but it's hard to fill it up and still keep it clean and neat.

      But i'm working on it