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GREAT idea with the illustration and style of the site - HOWEVER, in my opinion you ain't there yet. The illustrations of the tree, ground, fence and so on looks as if they were made in paint, which look kind of dull. Especialy the tree and ground.
You sould allso be more strictly to alignment.
And what seems to be “about” have way to little spacing. People are not interessted in reading all that! Create some exciting typograhy or something, so that you can catch people's attention!
And remember to fix so that all pages are not “portofolio” ;)
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Roald Pedersen commented:I definitely like the idéa, and think you should keep the tree, but just adding maybe two other colours of brown (on the brown) and green on the green, would pop thing much more!
Not making detailed illustrations, but a simple twitter type design, if you get my point?
And Don't try to get it all on one page! White space is not waisted space, less is more! :)
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Thanks for the feedback.
I've showed this to some other people and they all said i should remove the tree, because it just doesn't fit
The problem that i have is when you add some litle illustrations to a page, i always expect something else on another page.
But i'm thinking om something else to add to it.
And i must agree about the spacing, but in the end it think it will just be a short text, nothing long.
About the menu, i totally forgot about that :)