A Review of Photoshoot for an indie band by Oliver Martin

Bad background and placement

  • Oliver Martin

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    Bad background and placement

    Posted on Jul 28, 2009 at 6:04 PM

    The background has very little substance to it. You need to improve it by changing it or editing it in some form of image editor.

    The people look better in second shot but out of focus. The green blazer guy in bottom image is a great person for being in the middle because his top is much different compared to others. There isn't much width to these images nor height so you can't really extend the image because all you can fit in is a mugshot of their faces and chests.

    Keep working on it and you'll get a good balance.

    • Glenn Evans
      Glenn Evans commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 3:17 PM

      Thanks for the feedback, I do appreciate it!

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 6:08 PM

      If there just a small time band who don't expect much then this will do. I do think it's good but on the other hand I thin it could have been better :)

      Good luck with future projects

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 6:08 PM

      i think its good

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 6:09 PM

      I do think its good but it could be better. Good luck with future projects!

    • Glenn Evans
      Glenn Evans commented:
      Posted: on Jul 29, 2009 at 9:19 PM

      Yeah it was for a small time band. I'll keep those suggestions in mind. I'll have a few new band photos up soon.