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First of all, let me start off by saying that this is a great start. I like the colors and the imagery you have used. I would make a few modifications in order to make this design better. Extend the lighter gray content area so that is lines up with the edges of the blue box. The typography is could use a little work. For the header I would take the amount of text down and use some sort of fun text treatment. The content in the gray box seems a little dull. I would try and liven the text up a bit. In general I think you need to make this a bit more fun. I would play off the robot that you already have and go all out.
