• Shawn Johnston

    Shawn Johnston

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    Too cramped

    Posted on Jul 28, 2009 at 12:38 PM

    I'm not a fan of the logo, but that's not what's in review here. Right now, there's too much. With printing costs what they are these days, a double sided card costs the same as a single sided. I recommend moving the logo to the back of the card and layout out the info on the front side in a more creative fashion, allowing for a bit of negative space.

    Right now this card is kind of rubber stamped. Here's a space for something, plunk. Here's a space for something, plunk.

    As well, try working with some different out of the box fonts. There's a lot of sans fonts out there like Klavika or Diavlo or DIN that offer some style without being crazy. This Myriad choice is plain and overdone.