A Review of LCBC - LIFE Groups by Josh Jackson

A bit cluttered

  • Josh Jackson

    Josh Jackson

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    A bit cluttered

    Posted on Nov 03, 2009 at 9:16 AM

    Nate, I'll likely be reinforcing what others have said, but here are things that stick out to me:

    1. LIFE GROUPS font. I'm assuming this is a church group, but it looks like it could be a horror flick title or the perfect font for a cult instead.

    2. DOIN LIFE TOGETHER. Are these candles? Books? It's a bit fragmented from the rest of the site, and I'm not sure where it fits in with your hierarchy.

    3. Color buttons. Maybe it's my monitor, but I can barely make out ADULT and STUDENT. Perhaps tweak the colors more. However, I can read CHILDREN, so no problems there.

    4. Date box. It seems a bit lonely on the right. If you'll notice, most blogs place this on the left. I think this is probably the better way to go, seeing as we read left to right in Western culture. Plus, it creates proximity and groups similar elements.

    5. The chair. Sorry to harp on this, but it out of place and cast shadow needs work. It looks as if it's floating, not resting on a floor.

    6. Footer. I'm assuming there will be more footer info to come?