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I think you have a good design here but it could benefit from some detail work to make it more exciting. Whenever you use a dark strong with a drop shadow like you are here, it seems to blend together and makes the stroke look like it's feathered. I would maybe use an off white stroke. Think about putting a subtle texture in the background as well to liven things up. Overall this looks good, stay the coarse, just modify a few things.
