A Review of Cosmetics Packaging Company Website by Chris Coyier

Too much type for homepage

  • Chris Coyier

    Chris Coyier

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    Too much type for homepage

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    People will never read that much descriptive text. I'd shorten it up, or somehow make it more interesting typographically. Perhaps make the main image a little larger too and shorten up that line length.

    The logo looks a little generic web2.0 to me, with the reversed out "Pack", like LinkedIn. I'm not sure that's doing anything for the logo.

    The product images on the bottom are nice, I could see them moving up right front an center.

    • Szymon Niemczura
      Szymon Niemczura commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 6:05 PM

      Yes, you're right! I'll try to do something with this txt.

      Thanks for useful tips! :)

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