A Review of CARNAVAL GRAMADO by Leo K

colors?

  • Leo K

    Leo K

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    colors?

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 10:41 AM

    looks professional and fun. the guitar and the pandeiro detached are fun, I don't know what are those 3 cactuses, but they look colorful and ok.

    the only thing I thought it's a little bit strange is the brown-beige combination used in the name. Aren't they too serious for a carnaval party?

    but the overall design is really beautiful, it's even good as it is, IMO

    • Susan Bell
      Susan Bell commented:
      Posted: on Oct 27, 2009 at 11:04 AM

      Main type can be slightly bigger, instruments can be smaller. Tough read on the "L" in CARNAVAL. Move flourishes further to the right. Take out all black elements. I agree with comment above, I wouldn't use brown for a theme like this.