A Review of Website Prototypes by Jim Simpson

Clearer offering

  • Jim Simpson

    Jim Simpson

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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    Clearer offering

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:03 AM

    At a quick glance, I'm not able to tell what you do. Need to make your offering much clearer.

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:51 AM

      This is because the text and images are not yet finalized, mainly the main tagline in the banner. All images are placeholders.

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