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I think the main problem with this concept is the chosen picture. I would choose something a little more exciting and artistic. I would also get rid of the blue color, it sticks out far too much. I like everything else, I think your onto something. Typography is cool and makes me want to read it. The only other things you might want to add is details on how to get there, when, where sort of details. Good work.

thanks for the imput ) but.. i cant change the pic, it was a requierment of the poster... ill keep trying thanks )