A Review of My Logo by Oliver Martin

Improvements needed

  • Oliver Martin

    Oliver Martin

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Improvements needed

    Posted on Jul 25, 2009 at 5:36 PM

    Hi Nicole. Your design is good in concept all that is neeed is fine tuning. As Brian said the letters will need to be worked on. Not to copy Brian but they wont scale when enlarged and decreased in size as they seem kinda scratchy rather than smooth and scalable.

    So mainly work on the quality of the letters and the design will become at least 3 x better if not more.

    The monster IS fun and will let people know your great to work with and take things in your stride so definately keep it. Although make it "suck" on the O and perhaps have a small bit of monster slime come down over the O, that would be pretty neet.

    Much respect

    • Oliver
    • Nicole Domanski
      Nicole Domanski commented:
      Posted: on Jul 25, 2009 at 6:03 PM

      Very cool. Thanks a lot. I was trying to think of a way to make the letters and monster more connected so the slime idea will be perfect.

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