A Review of Logo for my company - Dax Design V2 by Paul Tamaro

I think the beak may be a little too long?

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    I think the beak may be a little too long?

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:20 PM

    It definitely caught my eye, and it's memorable -- very important for a logo -- it also looks good at the smaller size.

    It seems like there is just a little too much detail though? I would make the neck a little thicker, and raise the front wing just a bit at the shoulder -- it seems like the proportion is a little off in comparison to the lower portion of the back just above the tail.

    Good work...