A Review of Pitada by Ryan Simmons

Column clarity...

  • Ryan Simmons

    Ryan Simmons

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Column clarity...

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    This is lookin' good.

    My only comment would be on the first image - the two main columns run together a bit for me. They both have short rows with little constraining them. I don't want you to complicate the layout though too...

    Less on the second image due to the main / center column having different content from the "postar nova receita" column.

    Maybe a soft tint on the right column to separate it as secondary / different. Other than that, no complaints. Good stuff.

    • Ederson Morche
      Ederson Morche commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 7:09 AM

      I thought of using a background color in the right column, but there would have to move in alignment. Preferred to maintain the alignment and use higher margins.

    • Ederson Morche
      Ederson Morche commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 2:51 PM

      Refined the layout. If you can take a look at the third picture. Thank you.