A Review of Advansis website by Amy Feger

Type and text attention.

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    Type and text attention.

    Posted on Oct 20, 2009 at 11:45 PM

    Hi Miika.

    First, I like the colors, design, and the picks.

    Just have a review about the type and text part after viewing the site link;

    On the navigation type, maybe if you opened up the space between the letters I would be able to read them more comfortably. Maybe even try a different typeface, if it is still a bit difficult to read.

    All the blue news button type needs to come up a couple points at least. They are very hard to read.

    Final suggestion is to reword all your text. You have sentences that are way to long. Major grammar attention needed. I think the second paragraph is just one whole sentence.

    Example of punctuation needing help: We went to the park, as well as, the zoo. ( , as well as, ) Check out paragraph 2 on the front page alone.

    Who ever wrote the text needs to have another person proofread it and repair it.

    Beyond that, I like the blue swirly swirl pic!