A Review of Indoor Soccer Poster by Danelle Bailey

Typography

  • Danelle Bailey

    Danelle Bailey

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    Typography

    Posted on Oct 20, 2009 at 1:12 PM

    Typography needs work. Like the colors and concept. Contact info could stand out more than "registering now" - it's more important to remember the website info.

    • S. Preston Chuhon
      S. Preston Chuhon commented:
      Posted: on Oct 20, 2009 at 2:26 PM

      Thanks Danelle. Actually, you can't register on the website, (it's by mail-in/ fax registration). And using the old AIDA formula, I'm looking for the action to be "Register Now", not "go see the website".

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    • Danelle Bailey
      Danelle Bailey commented:
      Posted: on Oct 20, 2009 at 2:35 PM

      In that case, I would switch the website and phone number, and make the phone number stand out, with Register Now secondary in size, but also in red.

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    • S. Preston Chuhon
      S. Preston Chuhon commented:
      Posted: on Oct 20, 2009 at 6:06 PM

      Perfect! Thanks for taking time and consideration!

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    • Danelle Bailey
      Danelle Bailey commented:
      Posted: on Oct 21, 2009 at 8:38 AM

      Glad to help.

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