A Review of My Freelance Webdesigner Portfolio by Amy Feger

Ledge made on right side of second paragraph

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    2 Votes
    Ledge made on right side of second paragraph

    Posted on Oct 18, 2009 at 11:43 PM

    Hi Vincent,

    I love the bright pic selection for your front page. Your front page looks clean and interesting to me.

    Just a few things that may make it look even more nice are:

    Maybe Align the blue "Hello, I am" tab to the bottom of your last name?

    If possible to reword your first paragraph so there is no need to see a hyphen.

    Is there anyway to have your second paragraph so the right side of it doesn't have a big ledge? Maybe by pushing the words "or use" that's in the second line to the third?

    At first, I thought it was odd that one paragraph started with a capital and the other didn't then I realized the comma after hello. Is there anyway to maybe treat the second paragraph in the same way? maybe by adding the word "if" in front of the oddly worded question "You need a designer?" I think you would solve two problems with one stone on that one.

    I think the sticker takes away from the beauty of your site.

    Lastly, the type labeling all your free quote boxes seems way to small for me (and I don't wear glasses). Especially by your submit button. I understand it appears smaller as I view it on the preview. So, even with that considered.

    Overall, the site looks great and I wish I would have designed it. I like how you did your name in lowercase and your type choice.

    • Newbird Design
      Newbird Design commented:
      Posted: on Nov 20, 2009 at 9:52 AM

      SWEEET!

    • ruby lim
      ruby lim commented:
      Posted: on Dec 08, 2009 at 2:23 AM

      brilliant! your works are neat and eye-catching! love the way you play with the colors! wonderful job!

    • Vincent
      Vincent commented:
      Posted: on Dec 08, 2009 at 3:07 AM

      Thanks for these unexpected comments. It makes me happy. Too bad that my webcoder still doesn't have time yet... I have to wait to have it online :(

    • Aldrin Nolasco
      Aldrin Nolasco commented:
      Posted: on Feb 23, 2010 at 9:37 AM

      I love how this looks like. so clean and elegant.

    • Oliver Panckoucke
      Posted: on Feb 25, 2010 at 1:33 PM

      nice design! i'm curious how it will be online

    • Chesca Cabrera
      Chesca Cabrera commented:
      Posted: on Mar 22, 2010 at 5:52 PM

      This is clean and nice. I absolutely love it!