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I agree with the proportions issue. It does seem like a lot of things are disproportionate.
I also noticed that the lighting is off.. i.e. the highlight and shadow effects on some object are not in sync with the other objects.
http://www.grafpedia.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/1510.jpg
is a good example of how to pull off a design like this well.
Great start though! Looking forward to seeing the next version.
