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Hi Tyler,
I think this is very sleek and lovely. The only thing that gets me a bit is the space between the two words. I was often told not to repeat what is already implied. For if you do, it makes the reader feel mad for they have to stop longer. Like when you give space between paragraphs and indent...(double enforcing what the reader already knows.)
So, with the word payday being one color and motors another color. As the reader, I know they are two different words. Then a space between the two words is hitting me again. Separating "Payday" further away from "motors". When in the long run they need to feel together.
What I really like is how you have the color of the car the same as payday. I think all the colors are fitting for a classy car dealership.
