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Hi Miika,
I agree with sean here.
I thought the box on the left was just a side note you plopped on there as a note about the design. I was stunned to find out it was part of the design. If you're are stuck on keeping it. I think if you maybe toned the background of it down it would blend better with the design. ( Such as maybe in a dark grey or even black and making the type white or light grey?
From first glance at the top pic, before reading about the design, I thought I was looking at the inside of a gun barrel. I think the third pic is lovely and lets me know without confusion what this site is about...
on "This is Pure Design": Have you messed with aligning the type block to the stem of the T rather than the tip of the top of the T. The vertical stem has a stronger line, so visually it will look lined up better from afar.
Overall, I think these are great and would go for 3 and then maybe 1.
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Amy Feger commented:Miika, I like the new top design. The close up of the table looks interesting and pure. Then by having removed that left block makes it look clean.
I think this one is a winner.
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Amy Feger commented:
Miika,
I like the new top design. The close up of the table looks interesting and pure. Then by having removed that left block makes it look clean.
Now, Just bring the words in a bit to each other on the title and make the text block a few, to a couple, points bigger and it will top this one off.
It looks Great!
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Thanks for the comments, I'll definetly think and revamp the contact info, and the text align is as you said :)