A Review of My Freelance Webdesigner Portfolio by Espree Devora

So much better - more engaging

  • Espree Devora

    Espree Devora

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    So much better - more engaging

    Posted on Oct 15, 2009 at 6:21 PM

    I think the homepage pops and drams me in right away.

    All the pages need a purpose statement. Maybe a tagline under the tabs. Something about design.

    That image on the homepage is killer!

    The rest of the pages are super clean. Not sure what the network page is all about? Are those your clients?

    Portfolio page is great.

    That's you right? on the homepage? I really like that!

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 15, 2009 at 6:22 PM

      Yea HUGE improvement from the last one. The last one was great but was just like every other great site. Clean, to the point. But nothing popped. Now its engaging.

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    • Vincent
      Vincent commented:
      Posted: on Oct 16, 2009 at 2:44 AM

      Thanks, yes, it's a photo of me on the homepage. Network page is a page with all the persons i know who have a creative job or have development skills. Persons who can work with me on projects. I don't have enough clients to make a client pager for the moment.

      May be you are right i could explain the content of the page with a tagline.

      Thanks for your nice feedback.

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