A Review of LCBC - Hoops of Hope by Amy Feger

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  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
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    Posted on Oct 11, 2009 at 6:03 PM

    Hi Nate,

    I think the picture you have chosen for this is lovely.

    Look out, for under the title section "shoot hoops" I think you forgot to add an s to the word student.

    I agree with one of the above about that the text here is hard to read. Maybe if you open up the kerning a bit it will read better. Or maybe a serif typeface would make all the difference.

    Nice colors.