A Review of Freelancer Business Card v 3 - Updated by Nate Hamilton

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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Oct 11, 2009 at 3:19 PM

    This is a HUGE improvement from your last designs. I think your finally getting it :). Instead of going straight down the middle with your black and white, I might consider doing something more like a 30/70 split with the logo being in the smaller portion and maybe flipped on its side. The gold color needs to be introduced elsewhere as well. I feel like the gold is a little of a spare of the moment idea. You should also lessen the space between "/Web /graphic /design".

    You are completely on the right track with this though. Leaps and bounds better than your previous ones. Good direction!