A Review of Freelancer Business Card v 2 by Miro

simplify?

  • Miro

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    simplify?

    Posted on Oct 09, 2009 at 11:13 AM

    It's not bad at all, but it were mine I would simplify it. (In my own card there is only Adobe Caslon and nothing else and I like it). But this is a matter of taste so I suggest you also listen what others have to say.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Oct 10, 2009 at 12:56 AM

      You are getting there, I like the first one of the updates most. But I would still leave more space around the logo ;-D How should say it... it would respect the logo more, if you know what I mean.

      Take a look at these:

      http://creativebits.org/files/126898081_a50da43914.jpg

      http://reencoded.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/18.jpg

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    • Metin Ucar
      Metin Ucar commented:
      Posted: on Oct 10, 2009 at 7:22 AM

      Hi there Miro,

      I got what you mean. The examples you attached your comment clearly describe the whole point. Right now, I'm browsing through various business card designs to get inspired. Well, I've started to feel like the logo is pushed up, which doesn't look good. This is something what you and other fellows have emphasised. I'm gonna work on it once again, and soon post a new version for review.

      Thanks for the advices.

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