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memorable general concept could use some minor shuffling
try...
FRONT: more white space (even if you have to exend the descender at the same angle) :: move "redwall.ca" down :: remove the service list
BACK: simplify. a little less white space :: remove the box around the "logo" (just use red type without the "R"... you've made your point on the other side) :: add your service list :: type might be a little small for general business (unless all of your clientele are 20-somethings)
Just my thoughts for what they're worth. Thanks for listening.
