• Shane Ernest

    Shane Ernest

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    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
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    balance?

    Posted on Oct 06, 2009 at 6:40 PM

    this is a great website for sure, but it doesnt feel too original for me. i understand given the times how difficult that can be, but your site just blends in with the rest in my mind.

    that being said, i appreciate having a full sized photograph of you, which adds personality to your site and connects my mind with who are visually. excellent, especially when dealing with clients and potential clients. it's nice to ahve that personal touch. .

    the site has nothing necessarily "wrong" with it, it's clean, simple, elegant with nice choices. it just doesnt stick in my mind. . .

    i would move your menu to the right, which would help adjust the balance of the site. .

    all and all it's a very nice site and will be well received by many new and potential clients!

    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 06, 2009 at 6:42 PM

      i didn't see the first page for some reason!

      the spacing on those three bottom divs "who what how" is uneven. just bring them in a bit and make sure the spacing works together. . .

      i'd also think of a better way to show that image than on a macpro screen - too common today. it looks nice, clean, but far from original.