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First thing I thought was apple. That pro image and the little arrows are so apple-y. Maybe find a different way to showcase/highlight work? I mean, I'd guess that's pulled from the apple site.
I am digging the footer and subdued color palette.
Also that about me image is an great human/engaging touch! Instantly connect more after seeing that image. Maybe remove the "things you don't like" blurb?
Nice job!
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Doy Cave commented:That was what I thought immediately. Apple. Not that that's a bad thing...but yeah.
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Stas Zlobinski commented:I would remove "things i don't like" blurb as Nate suggests. It doesn't add much value, and you don't want to alienate some people.
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Stas Zlobinski commented:
May be instead say "things i love" or "things i can't live without" so you go from positive to even more positive rather than positive to negative. I think it works better from psychological attitude perspective.
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I think you're right for the apple thing. That was a part of my doubts about this design. I think i will try to make it more "alive"
Thanks for your feedback
i wanted to say that i vectorised the macbook pro myself from a photo, just because i didn't want just to get a photo from the site, but, i know this isn't an excuse :)
I'll think about another way to preview my works.
Thanks again.