A Review of logo for my design portfolio by Shane Ernest

the thought/comment bubble

  • Shane Ernest

    Shane Ernest

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    the thought/comment bubble

    Posted on Oct 01, 2009 at 12:23 AM

    i think the comment bubble is distracting when used more as an accent. your customized type should be able to hold on it's own as a purely typographic mark.

    your tagline is also way too small. . . if anything it should be to the left of the 't's decscender. . . and probably be enlarged a few points. i'd also kick your letter 'v' over a few bits, the kerning is too much in comparison to the 't' and 'i'. .

    the colors are nice and vibrant, very high energy. is that something that represents your business?

    im also concerned about the abbreviations for the telly numbers. . .

    id really focus on the tone and energy behind your company. synthesizing that down should help flesh out new ideas. . .

    enjoy!