A Review of Leaflet advertising how libraries support reading groups - revised by Amy Feger

Hi Rachel,

If this were mine I would tweak:

The first paragraph so the word "weeks" was not alone. Then, since I find the paragraph under "Feedback" to be really long. I would cut that in to two separate thoughts.

I would maybe also try and align the text, under the person reading, to the left side of the picture.

Maybe, also in the main title try pushing the words " Talk about" to the left a bit and line up the strong stem of the "b" in books to the stem in T above it. I would then line up the paragraph below it to the title edge rather than the pink block edge. Having that paragraph the same distance away from the block, as the black box is from the picture of the women.

on the second presented page, after some of the commas there are big gaps of space. Maybe consider closing them so the eye is not stopped in them.

Also, maybe try making the leading between "our Customers" and "can expect" smaller.

The red, black and blue logos are mis-aligned.

One last thing to consider is to bring the words closer together in the sub-titles of " We Can Help", "Start Your Own Group", and "In Return We Ask You To".

I wonder how it would brighten up the page if you made the whole two lines pink of " This charter is our commitment to reading groups, and...Kent."

Overall, I enjoy the colors and white space.