A Review of Paper Recycling Poster for Schools by Velociraptor

the lined paper, what's the message?

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    the lined paper, what's the message?

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 7:15 PM

    It seems like an advertisement for a driving school honestly. more like stop, think, drive/learn/besafe. Very nice visuals though think seems a bit odd. too yellow since the other two are white.

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      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 7:16 PM

      oh shoot posted before I talked about the paper. ok so I know it's recycling but what about maybe a crinkled paper? like balled up in the background, or some more emphasis on throwing away rather than hey look paper.

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    • Heriberto Rubalcava
      Heriberto Rubalcava commented:
      Posted: on Sep 29, 2009 at 7:22 PM

      Im digging the concept, not to sure about the execution 1. the paper for the bg looks good but looks odd with the traffic light. on top seems floating. Also it is very visually strong i don't think it needs the words stop think, recycle. Suggestion remove words leave hte lights along with the recycle logo. Looks good so far.

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