A Review of Webdesign for a local fashion boutique by Dan Edington

first page good. second page bad.

  • Dan Edington

    Dan Edington

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    first page good. second page bad.

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 4:37 PM

    Are you actually going to have enough "about the store" copy to fill the box? Even after paragraphs? You'll probably end up with a whole load of white space which wont look good in this case.

    Try using the whole content area (the area on the first page with the photo of the woman) to display these levels down instead of having the same text-over-image template on every page. Make each page a design on its own (whilst keeping consistency throughout the site).

    • S. Preston Chuhon
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 4:50 PM

      For blogging sections I plan to use the whole right area for content. The image will change depending on which page is displaying. I have a kewl, little display gallery I plan to use for the collection.

      Tx for your comments!