A Review of Website and logo by Magnus Fossum

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  • Magnus Fossum

    Magnus Fossum

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Sep 25, 2009 at 9:13 AM

    I think the logo works good as it is, but I think maybe I would have aligned the words differently than centered.

    What if 'online' was more left and 'voices' more to the right and the horisontal line longer on both sides. I think that may make the logo a bit more dynamic.

    • Maxim Barkhatov
      Maxim Barkhatov commented:
      Posted: on Sep 26, 2009 at 12:08 AM

      First of all, to me it seems like the horizontal rule between "online" and voices adds an unnecessary separation between the two ideas.

      Second, consider using semiotics when choosing type. Using a slab-serif type for voices seems appropriate, since historically this style of lettering was developed to grab attention.

      For online, I would probably use a sans serif typeface that complements Clarendon.

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    • Maxim Barkhatov
      Maxim Barkhatov commented:
      Posted: on Sep 26, 2009 at 12:11 AM

      Also, have you considered how the form of a lowercase "i" resembles a hand-held microphone?

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    • Besmile4ever Otai
      Besmile4ever Otai commented:
      Posted: on Sep 26, 2009 at 3:23 AM

      nice work..i like it.

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